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PostSubject: EoE.   Sat Mar 23, 2013 6:54 pm

Eye of Enlightenment


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What it Does: If this were Bleach, this would be kinda like my bankai. Boosts perception levels, allows forced access into other's psyches (therein, he can engage in a battle with a mind-opponent (Called a Koa). Depending on their perception levels [15 higher than my Genjutsu levels], he can defeat the mind opponent and plant a suggestion, or, be defeated by the mind-opponent, and be removed from the psyche.), releases immense pressure when enemies near user. This pressure acts as a sort of near-impenetrable shield. It reaches nearly 3 inches away from his body, but the pressure is enough to cut a diamond if it's held there long enough. However, he can be cut, if the opponent's Taijutsu is 10 points above his (Or if they can use high powered Raikiris, that means Xavier only... Sorry.). This Jutsu can be used for 3 posts before shutting down. In return for slowly losing his right eye, it grants him immense healing capabilities. Can only be used 120 times (Everywhere. In topics, the limit still stands. This limit goes everywhere. He can literally ONLY use this 120 times. Ever.) before eye becomes blind and can no longer use this jutsu. Can only be shut off by the user (in this case, recharge time is 3 turns), or if eye is stabbed by some miracle. Once stabbed the jutsu seal breaks, and it takes 20 turns to regenerate. There's a surprise at the end however, when all 120 uses have been fulfilled. You have been warned.

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PostSubject: Re: EoE.   Sat Mar 23, 2013 8:28 pm

I can see some things here that need some tampering with...

First of all, the 74 uses has to be drastically lowered. Chances are, anybody would only use this type of Jutsu 30 times, maybe. Lower it to about 8, and that hurdle is passed... (You can use it as many times per topic as you wish, but you only get either 8 or less uses out of it, before the eye is sealed away forever. Similar to the Mangekyou Techniques.)

Second, if your using Bleach Logic, this sounds like Kenpachi's 'shield', however, Ichigo was able to break threw said 'shield' when his Reiryoku/Reiatsu was just as powerful, if not more so, than Kenpachi's own. As such, a limit similarly must be placed. Probably a certain level of stat higher than a certain level of one of yours. Like “Opponent's Taijutsu must be 15 points higher than My Ninjutsu stat to penetrate.” That, or one with Ninjutsu. (No Genjutsu, Speed, or Perception).

Third, that surprise at the end has to be explained. It's too vague. If it ends up being a Village Destroying Explosion, well, then it becomes void as an ability. Explain what it is please? Another example, even if it's not an 'explosion' is an Insta-Kill to any opponent.



Even then, I'm afraid you can't trade any items in for any other items... All items bust be baught, no one item is equal to another, and cannot be traded. They can be sold back to the shop for half price, but cannot be traded in. (So if your Clan Slots are worth 2 Jutsu Slot MAXes, then your ok, just sell the Clan Slots, and use the EXP gained from that to buy the Jutsu Slots.)

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PostSubject: Re: EoE.   Sat Mar 23, 2013 9:21 pm

*Goes to do that*

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PostSubject: Re: EoE.   Sat Mar 23, 2013 11:05 pm

Changed all of it, and I PM'ed you what the "surprise" is, an why I put so many uses.

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